The year five's in my class were having a very fun week with out the year sixes, the year sixes were at Camp Kaitawa, until they came back on Friday. In the week we made boats and smoothies. Go into the slides and have a look, they are very interesting! The slides will turn every thirty seconds for you.
Wow Betsy seems like you had a lot of fun I think you could have added A little bit more writing in your slides but I think you did an amazing job man looked like you enjoyed week 7. Just wait for next year :)
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Hi besty, your blog is so interesting i did not know you did all of that well we were gone.Maybe you could tell us what skills you learnt with seba? From Millie
ReplyDeleteYour slide is very interesting Betsy!
ReplyDeleteBut, the only thing is (it doesn't change every 30 seconds, I think there is an issue)
You have added lots of detail and now I understand what was happening when the Y5 boys
(failed to) explained what happened in the week.
Hi Betsy, I love all the detail you put into your slides. From Aria
ReplyDeleteHi betsy, I love how you have put detail into your writing. Just one thing the slide does not change every 30 seconds
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ReplyDeleteI loved your slide and, finding out what the year 5s did without us. I can't believe there were only 14 of you! last year there were 30. I think next time, maybe you could give it a background that hooks the reader in, on the slides. I also think you could have added a few more photos. Over all I think your slide and blog are great! Charlotte A.
Hi Betsy, I agree with cornelia. you slide doesn't change every 30 seconds but It´s still wonderful. i liked how you actually got a photo of the boats. It's a really cool slide and blog. Charlotte
ReplyDeletewow betsy love all the info that you put into your slide it make more sense to me now looking at the writing. From Lila
ReplyDeleteHi Betsy, I really liked how you created a picture in my brain because you have descriptive writing. It sounds like you had a really fantastic week. That is amazing that you got more confident to speak louder. Did you like soccer with Seba?
ReplyDeleteThe slides changed once I posted them so they didn't change every thirty seconds any more.
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